封面_mh1462588646908.jpg

影片連結:

https://youtu.be/n8kSF9SUrAI

D01結束了_mh1462940959751.jpg

It is over.

 

D02結束了?結束了_mh1462941065453.jpg

Is it over?

It is over.

 

D04詛咒成功了嗎?我想是的_mh1462941161341.jpg

Is the curse working now?

I think so.

 

D05我要去看看,讓我看看我們的成果。_mh1462941263976.jpg

I want to see him,

I want to see our result.

 

D06就照妳的意思,艾瑪。我們去馬羅家看看他。 唔..._mh1462941395491.jpg

As you wish, Emma, let's go to Maro's home.

Gee..

 

D07A怎麼了?頭有點昏_mh1462941492978.jpg

Are you all right?

A little dizzy.

 

D07如果妳累的話,我們也可以明天再過去。_mh1462941625541.jpg

We can go to see him tomorrow if you are tired.

 

D08亞倫,我現在就要見他。_mh1462941731682.jpg

Alan, 

I want to see him... now.

 

D09好啊!上車吧!_mh1462941834897.jpg

OK,

Let's go!

 

D10_mh1462941912162.jpg

D11_mh1462941939542.jpg

D12過了十分鐘_mh1462942043037.jpg

After 10 minutes.

 

D13哇!以一個編輯來說,他住的地方真不錯!_mh1462942149874.jpg

Wow,

Nice place!

 

D14這麼晚了,馬羅在睡覺吧?_mh1462942267009.jpg

It is midnight, maybe Maro is sleeping.

 

D15或許詛咒已經生效,他現在已經從床上滾落地面,痛苦地翻來覆去?_mh1462942450203.jpg

Maybe the curse is working, Maro is suffering by the disease then.

 

D16有辦法進去嗎?嗯..._mh1462942537866.jpg

Can we get in to the house?

hmm...

 

D17這裡!_mh1462942619991.jpg

Here!

 

D18牆不高,我們翻進去_mh1462942732661.jpg

We can climb the fence then.

 

D19不該穿裙子的_mh1462942882261.jpg

I should not wear skirt!

 

D20嘿_mh1462943024338.jpg

Hey!

 

D21我們進來了_mh1462943098466.jpg

Now we get in.

 

D22現在怎麼辦_mh1462943188076.jpg

Have we been seen by someone?

 

D23後門沒有鎖,進去吧_mh1462943255351.jpg

Unlock, let's get into the house!

 

E24好暗_mh1462967514962.jpg

So dark....

 

E25什麼都看不到_mh1462967577003.jpg

I can't see anything.

 

E26動作放輕點_mh1462967638327.jpg

Take easy.

 

E27嗯_mh1462967703462.jpg

Uh-huh.

 

E28哎呀!_mh1462967827046.jpg

Geez!

 

E29痛!_mh1463029277216.jpg

Ouch!

 

E30嗚..._mh1463029326480.jpg

Ow...

 

E31哇!_mh1463029691383.jpg

Arrgh!

 

E32他是馬羅? 對_mh1463030346317.jpg

Is he maro?

Yeah!

 

E33..._mh1463030406539.jpg

E34!_mh1463031591001.jpg

E35他死了 哎?_mh1463031746740.jpg

He is dead!

What?

 

E36奇怪,是咒語或儀式中出了什麼錯嗎?怎麼會殺死他呢?_mh1463031915343.jpg

What wrong with the spell of magic? why it kill him?

 

E37一定是某個步驟出錯了!我明明只是打算讓他生一場病而已啊……_mh1463032476358.jpg

It must something wrong with the spell. It should just make him diesea...

 

E38殺人了!我殺人了!!我殺了馬羅!!!!_mh1463032648394.jpg

We kill him, we kill Maro!

 

E39嗚嗚...我們快離開這裡!我們進來的時候一定留下了許多腳印和指紋,_mh1463119540647.jpg

We need get out of here...

No! We've left many footprint and fingerprint here when we get into the house.

 

E40現在逃走警察還是會找上我們的_mh1463119618892.jpg

The cop will find us if we escape...

What should we do then?

 

E41不如……不如想個辦法……_mh1463035475172.jpg

We need do something about it...

 

E42人都死了還想什麼辦法?_mh1463035539125.jpg

But Maro is dead!

 

E43我也不知道_mh1463035583952.jpg

I have no idea currently.

 

E44但是我們不能就這樣把馬羅丟在這裡。_mh1463035653325.jpg

But we can't leave Maro here.

 

E45唔..._mh1463035712210.jpg

Maybe I can find the answer in the book.

 

E46過了十分鐘_mh1463035766162.jpg

After 10 minutes.

 

E47過了三十分鐘_mh1463035828733.jpg

After 30 minutes.

 

E48有辦法了_mh1463035934854.jpg

I got it!

 

E49有什麼辦法?你快說呀_mh1463119873774.jpg

What it is?

 

E50這是一個讓死者重新復活的法術,_mh1463119942777.jpg

There is a magic: raise from dead.

 

E51必須準備下列物品:屍體、骸骨、鮮血,以及死者的照片一張...._mh1463120213876.jpg

The materials include: corpse, bones, blood and the photo.

 

E52這個法術很困難,而且非常黑暗,上面警告說死還比較乾脆。_mh1463120312564.jpg

This magic is very diffcult and darkness.

 

E53有多黑暗?_mh1463120353168.jpg

Darkness?

 

E54不知道_mh1463120380311.jpg

I do not know.

 

E55但是它說:『唯有死亡才能換回生命。』_mh1463120496535.jpg

"Only death can bring life back"

 

E56我想這一定不是普通的警告。_mh1463120560073.jpg

I don't think it is just a simpe warn!

 

E57沒有其他辦法了?_mh1463120605400.jpg

Is there any other way?

 

E58A沒有了_mh1463120641494.jpg

Nope.

 

E58那就動手吧!_mh1463120680398.jpg

Do it then.

 

E59這個咒語可能非常危險。_mh1463120722087.jpg

It might dangerours!

 

E60不管有多危險,我不希望變成殺人兇手。_mh1463120796376.jpg

I don't mind, 

I don't want be a murder.

 

E61好吧!我們必須先收集材料_mh1463120855506.jpg

All right!

We must looking for the materials.

 

E62來,幫我一把,把馬羅搬進車廂,_mh1463120941585.jpg

Give me a hand,

move Maro's body to the car.

 

F01_mh1463121403450.jpg

F02_mh1463121426763.jpg

F03過了一小時_mh1463121488006.jpg

After a hour

 

F04我們最後清點一次材料 嗯_mh1463121565199.jpg

Final check.

 

F05屍體_mh1463121648590.jpg

Corpse.

 

F06骸骨_mh1463121697767.jpg

Bones.

 

F07鮮血_mh1463121742448.jpg

Blood.

 

F08死者照片_mh1463121971167.jpg

Photo.

 

F09冥界中至高無上的暗黑之神呀!我在此向您祈求_mh1463122115269.jpg

The highest lord from the hell,

I pray for you

 

F10藉由您的偉大之力,打開冥界的大門_mh1463122207118.jpg

Open the gate by your great power.

 

F11茶茶斯茶茶斯_mh1463122434418.jpg

Cha Chas, Cha Chas,

 

F12茶茶納斯茶茶斯_mh1463122492606.jpg

Cha Cha Nas Cha Chas

 

F13茶歐拉魯_mh1463122911015.jpg

Cha O La Lu!

 

F14..._mh1463122650363.jpg

 

F15什麼事都沒發生呀 奇怪了_mh1463122746574.jpg

Nothing happen!

Strange!

 

F16茶歐拉魯_mh1463122861683.jpg

Cha O La Lu!

 

F17過了十分鐘 還是不行,失敗了嗎?_mh1463123035771.jpg

Still not work!

Failed?

 

F18那...那現在該怎麼辦?_mh1463123092035.jpg

What should we do now?

 

F19我也不知道_mh1463123316454.jpg

I have no idea

 

F20我好累,好累……_mh1463123430732.jpg

I am tired... very tired...

 

F21這個咒文付出的體力太大了,我必須休息……_mh1463123521819.jpg

The spell cost me much energy.

I must rest.

 

F22我們必須想辦法處理馬羅..._mh1463123607471.jpg

We must deal with Maro's body.

 

F23也許先分屍再埋起來_mh1463123669359.jpg

Maybe we need cut into pieces.

 

F24嗯... 動一下_mh1463123834968.jpg

Uh...

Fsssss~

 

F25喂!亞倫~你快看!他好像活過來了!_mh1463123982143.jpg

Hey, Look! Alan.

He is back!

Fsss....

 

F26真是太好了,我還以為我的魔法失敗了……_mh1463124086029.jpg

Great! I thought my spell is failed...

Fsss~Fsss~

 

F27嘎_mh1463124200714.jpg

Uh...

 

G01!_mh1463124815834.jpg

Arrgh!

 

G01你們好大的膽子啊!_mh1463124887684.jpg

How dare you!

 

G02竟然敢暗算我 不!_mh1463125169829.jpg

You stap me in the back!

 

G03我要殺死你們啊啊啊啊 不要_mh1463125210802.jpg

I will kill you!

 

G04艾瑪,妳快走!_mh1463125342261.jpg

Bang!

Run, Emma, Run!

Gee...

 

G05誰都別想活著離開! 呃..這力量..._mh1463125467693.jpg

No one can leave here!

Ahh.... 

 

G06快走...快..._mh1463125537197.jpg

Alan!?

Go... Just go...

 

G07嘎啊_mh1463125590652.jpg

Gasp!

 

G08呼呼呼_mh1463125641456.jpg

ha...ha...ha...

 

G09!_mh1463126178251.jpg

Wrryyyy!

 

G10艾瑪,你跑不掉的!_mh1463126302159.jpg

Emma, you can not escape!

 

G11拖稿必須死! 不!_mh1463126413668.jpg

Nooooo!

 

G12不要啊!_mh1463126492443.jpg

Help!

 

G13殺死妳!殺死妳!殺死妳!_mh1463126614023.jpg

Kill! Kill! Kill!

 

G14救命_mh1463126659452.jpg

Eeeeek....

 

G15站住_mh1463126722596.jpg

Freeze!

 

G16碰磅_mh1463126836573.jpg

Bang!

 

G17別以為躲在裡面就沒事了_mh1463126931204.jpg

Bang bang bang!

you can't hide in the house forever!

 

G18開門_mh1463127002102.jpg

Open the door!

bang bang bang!

 

G19給我滾出來! _mh1463127077139.jpg

Get out of the house!

bang bang!

G20哈!哈!哈!_mh1463127243334.jpg

Ha! Ha! Ha!

G21嗚嗚..._mh1463127295177.jpg

Ha...

 

G22怎麼辦怎麼辦_mh1463127365250.jpg

Horrible...Horrible...

 

G23咦?_mh1463127449342.jpg

?

 

G24沒聲音了?_mh1463127538806.jpg

No sound... Is he leave?

 

G25匡啷_mh1463127763883.jpg

Clank!

 

G26笨蛋!_mh1463127902706.jpg

Eeeeeeek!!

Fool!

 

G27妳逃不掉的!_mh1463127957354.jpg

You can not escape!

 

G28呃_mh1463127995718.jpg

Uh...

 

G29咚_mh1463128053433.jpg

Dong!

 

G30_mh1463128193315.jpg

H01_mh1463128926631.jpg

H02都嚕嚕嚕~_mh1463129061371.jpg

Riiiiing~

 

H04哇啊 都嚕嚕嚕_mh1463129214805.jpg

Eeeeekk!

Riiiiiing~

 

H05天亮啦?_mh1463129304625.jpg

Huh?

Riiiiiiiing~

 

H06嗶_mh1463129342827.jpg

Beep~

 

H08喂?_mh1463129385149.jpg

Hello?

 

H09艾瑪,我是馬羅。_mh1463129626113.jpg

Emma? Maro Speaking,

 

H10今天就是截稿日,妳的稿子趕出來沒有啊?_mh1463129722669.jpg

This is deadline today, are you finish your work?

 

H11對不起,我、我睡著了……_mh1463129771713.jpg

Sorry...I....

I had slept.

 

H12睡著了!?妳想害我開天窗嗎?_mh1463129829206.jpg

Slept? What's the hell !

 

H13我五分鐘後到妳家,中午以前給我把稿子趕出來!_mh1463129900302.jpg

I will go to see you after 5 minutes later, you need finish it before noon!

 

H14嗶_mh1463129932411.jpg

Beep~

 

H15可惡,好可怕的噩夢_mh1463129970822.jpg

Damn it, what a horriable nightmare!

 

H16但...如果不是夢呢?_mh1463130013467.jpg

But... is it possiable not just a nightmare?

 

H17馬羅該不會提著腦袋來找我吧?_mh1463130070896.jpg

Will Maro bring his head to see me then?

 

H18叮咚_mh1463130179381.jpg

Ding Dong!

 

I01_mh1463130781976.jpg

I02還好...頭還在_mh1463130865580.jpg

At lease, he has head.

Ha~

 

I03還不快開門? 來了_mh1463130943905.jpg

Open the door quickly!

OK!

 

I04艾瑪,今天以內稿子一定要出去_mh1463131003044.jpg

Emma,

You must finish your work today.

 

I05如果不出去,妳知道我會怎麼對付妳嗎?_mh1463131148841.jpg

If you havn't, do you know how will I deal with you?

 

I06我知道_mh1463131180578.jpg

Yes, I know.

 

I07不,妳不知道_mh1463131279821.jpg

No, you don't.

 

I08馬羅脖子上有一道口子,歪斜地用針線固定住他搖搖欲墜的腦袋…………_mh1463131772391.jpg

There is a stitch mark on Maro's neck, fixed his shake and crumb head...

 

I09END_mh1463131862263.jpg

End

 

--

後記:

本來以為會拖很久才能完稿,不過因為大家的支持我還是於預定時間內完成... 謝謝大家!讀者的鼓勵一直是我創作的原動力。很感謝 Ruby Red 的房屋,雖然作太美了很容易讓我的劇情不小心被拉走,但這部分是我該加油,讓劇情無愧妳精美的房屋。最後,為了讓國外朋友也看得懂,我試著用我文法很爛的英文翻了一遍,如果有發現文法錯誤請跟我說...謝謝大家的收看! 下回見!

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  • 薇琪
  • 真驚悚 ><
    馬羅是吸血鬼嗎? 臉色好青
  • 馬羅的皮膚設定是像死人又像活人,這是為了最後面讓人不知道他是死是活的梗...又,他的原型是石內卜喔!

    路克十三 Luke13 於 2016/05/14 02:28 回覆

  • Ruby Red
  • 超酷的 那亞倫後來去那了? 我超級進入劇情的 很棒的小故事呦! 我會繼續支持的!
  • 最後看到他是被馬羅掐著脖子壓在地上 XD

    路克十三 Luke13 於 2016/05/17 21:43 回覆

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