Alien: Origins
by Luke13
2117 A.D
July
Prince Paris.
Lightweight Space Ship.
6 members.
Status:
Exploration Helen II,
Missoion complete, return to Earth.
Tiya.
Oh... The mission is not doing very well. The temperature on Helen II is too high for human. We are all disappointed....
Tiya, An unknown distress signal detected. Please go to command center.
Oh?
Got it, mother, I will be there soon.
*Mother is the computer of the space ship.
After a while....
( Woosh~ )
Tiya: Mother, connected to the screen.
Mother: Processing, please wait.
Hey, wait a minute...
I should wake up everyone!
( Toing~ Toing~ Toing~ )
( Woosh~)
(Bzzzz~)
(Bzzzz~)
Mother, wake up everyone.
(Beep!)
(Bzzz~)
The sleep program is released.
(beep!)
(Bzzz~)
Ben: Good morning!
Will: Are we home?
Alin: (Yawn~)
In fact, not yet...
Ashley: Why you wake up us then?
Oberon: What's wrong?
Mother got a distress signal, but...
Ashley: but?
Oberon: All right, report the detail to us later!
This is the planet which the source of the distress signal.
No record of this planet. The analysis report as below:
The planet is the fourth of the eight planets in their galaxy.
Diameter 12500KM,
Rotation period 23.5 earth time.
Revolution cycle 360 rotation unit.
The air in the atmosphere are:
Nitrogen 71%,
Oxygen 28%
Hydrogen 0.8%
Carbon 0.03%
Will: Wait, are you mean?
Ben: Are you talking about...
The Earth similar planet!
That is good news!
Helen II is not suit for human lived. Maybe this planet will meet our require!
It seem that we should go and take a look!
Mother, how many time will we go to this planet?
Mother: 34 hours!
Alin: Perfect time!
All right, let's move!
Full speed forward!
3 days later...
Zoooom~
Bzzzzz~
I can't believe that the planet look so much like earth...
Warm and humid, perfect!
Awful! Here is the best place to human lived!
We will see!
Rifle loaded, let's go.
After a while...
The distress singnal source is here.
No matter who are the help people. They are all gone, no one alive!
What is the cause of death?
I can't make sure now, but I guess they are attacked by something...
Hey, guys! come here!
What do you think of these?
An egg?
A big egg?
Will: Is it alive?
Oberon: I'm not sure...
What?
(Splash!)
Will: It open?
Ben: be careful, commander...
Oberon: something is moving in the egg....
(whipok!)
Wooooahhhhhh!
Ben: Take off it!
Will: Can't be! it stick very well!
Will: Commander, commander!
Ben: Oh, no... He lost consciousness!
We take him back to Prince Paris.
Okay!
....
...
( Whoam~)
(click~click~click~)
hmm.....
.
Arrrgh!
Alin: How are you feel?
Oberon: What's happen?
Alin: Do you remember? You are attacked by the alien creatures!
Oberon: Alien creatures?
Alin:
Yeah! Will and Ben took you back.
The deputy commander would not have allowed you to return to Prince Paris because you have not passed quarantine,
We finally convinced her.
Oberon: Oh yeah?
Alin: I tried to cut the leg of the alien creature, then I found it has a strong acid blood.
Look! The floor has been corrosioned by acid blood.
!?
Wow, really?
Really.
what did you deal it then?
I did nothing!
It was not long before, the alien creature dead.
I wonder when are you wake up.
I'm so boring when you are sleep.
Come on! take off your clothes!
Now?
well.... Okay....
I wonder he wake up now..
Shock!
What.... what are you two doing?
Tiya... take off your clothes too and join us!
uh....
Hahahaha....
What do you want?
Deputy commander ask you to have a meeting in command central.
Oh yeah? well...
Alin, put on your clothes, we go meeting!
Damn....
I am just climax!
Huh?
(pu-tong~ pu-tong~)
Tiya: ?
Oberon: (Cough~)
(pu-tong~ pu-tong~)
(pu-tong~ pu-tong~)
Tiya: Commander?
Alin: What's wrong?
Oberon: (Panting)
(pu-tong~ pu-tong~)
(pu-tong~ pu-tong~)
Arrrrgh!
Commaner! Commander!
(moaning)
HheeeeeyAaahhhhhh......
(whap~)
......
(whap!)
What the hell?
Geeee......
(Squeak~)
(Sqeak~)
Squeak!
(tap~tap~tap~tap~)
Squeak!
.
Alin: Oh no! It escaped from the hole!
Tiya: We should inform Deputy commander very soon!
After a while....
Mother, Start biological radar, find out the creature!
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後記：
呼，終於完稿了！
這一篇花了三個半月才完成，打造科幻場景的困難度很高，每一個場景基本上都非常花心思。後製方面一堆特效不說，在研究了光線和改色的技巧後，因為路克對作品的偏執，後期的每一張圖幾乎都大修過……回頭來看有一種我竟然還能把這篇完成的感觸……真是太累人了！不過，幸好我堅持到完稿。異形系列是我最愛的電影，它影響我的創作很深……看著自己喜歡的主題成形為實體作品，非常有成就感！雖然我不知道最後會有多少人欣賞本作，至少我自己完成後重看還蠻滿意的。
本作一如慣例是先寫好劇本的，劇情幾乎照著劇本走沒有更改。人物設定則做了小幅度的修改……除了愛琳以外的人個性都變動不大。愛琳轉黑是臨時決定的，但因為這個臨時起意，她變成故事後半段的靈魂人物，少了她劇情相信就會單調許多，我果然比較擅長描寫壞人……也因為愛琳的發揮，讓幾個重要角色個性更鮮明。例如女主角蒂亞。她的結局是我很喜歡的開放式結局，最後充滿孤寂絕望，卻又不得不堅強起來……期待未來的作品還有讓她發揮的機會……
這一篇故事是我構思異形三部曲的第一部，未來如果還有毅力，希望能把後面兩部也完成！不過應該不會是近期……這一篇作品和上一篇作品《最後一顆子彈》這類科幻故事都太花時間和心思了，我一整個把自己搞得很累……我打算休息一下，先做些比較簡單的故事。等到哪天再次熱血沸騰時再來著手製作第二部甚至第三部的故事。
最後感謝紫月凌幫我做的異形模組，非常精美，讓我能夠實現創作異形故事的願望。也謝謝各位讀者們的收看，請繼續的支持。我們下一篇故事再見嘍！
18th Sep, 2017
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